IELTS 작문 팬 Wenjing 강의: 늦은 아이

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IELTS 작문 모범: 젊은 아이

nowadays people are becoming parents later in life.some think it is not a good DD Give youropinion.give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

parenting may be as late as possible, but not later.research shows that by the age of 30, A woman's chances of conceiving begin to dwindle.there are advantages to having children young, Although these days life is rarely that simple.the argument is that, if people want children at all, It is better to start as early as possible for the development of the family and the country.

good or bad, Late parenting is a new fashion.despite cases related to unwanted teenage pregnancies, Many people choose to become parents later in life.this social mainstream is particularly obvious among people of the middle class in most develt Countries.it is clear enough that many women are putting off babies for career and financial reasons.besides, If people are planning a one-child or two-child family, There is indeed no such a hurry to be 'in the family way 'like those old-fashioned women a couple of generations ago.no wonder that peer Wait until they think they are' ready' to become parents, no matter how late it might be or what could happen as

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relatively, the consequences are more negative than positive, not just for the family but also for the Late parenthood would mean a surplus of old people and not enough workers.this is likely to stymie the country's economy.in contrast More teenage mothers would mean a population-economic-boom.based on this presumption, Women should finish having their families when they are younger (than 30) 및 then have more years of employment ahead of them.as expected Their children would also sooner come into the labor force and add to the national economic growth.

in sum, There seem to be alarm bells on late parenting because this could benefit neither the development of the family nor the society in the economic contex T. while the decision to become parents later in life is personal, even realistic；; The time for a woman to get pregnant is certainly not' forever'. in parenting, it is one thing that modern people do not desire having ONG But it is quite another to be too late to become parents for at least once.

4 월 8 일 IELTS 대작문 모범문이 늦게 아이를 가질 때의 장단점

in mark People decide to have children at la ter age than in the past.

why?

do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages? < /p>

많은 나라에서 사람들은 과거에 비해 아이를 늦게 낳기로 했다.

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이런 발전의 이익은 폐단보다 크지 않습니까?

샘플 writing:

the average age of couples entering parenthood is increasing in all continents.the possible reasons include social value and Caltech.this essay will explain the reasons of this phenomenon in more detail and examine the beneficial and detrimental effects of the trend. 부모

a vital reason for parents determining to have kids la ter in their lives than before is the varied social value.in the People regarded the family relationship and union as the primary issue, And having offspring to inherit the family tradition and business used to be of significant importance.however, in modern society, The accelerated pace of life has made people stressful, And the whole society judge an individual by monetary things far more than the identity of parents.the full time parents are facing the pressure OS Eing eliminated by society, as a result, they choose to focus on getting promotion, earning money, and climbing up the social ladder Since this is how success is defined.another essential cause of late parenthood is that the oocyte freezing technic has made it possible for profit Onal females to pregnant in their forties or even fifties.thus, more families decide to have children when they are of sufficient capability

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monetary 돈의 < /p>

define 정의 (v.)

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there are both advantages as well as disadvantages of delaying having the first baby.it is commonly recognized that there is a ha Iddle aged pregnant women to suffer from gestational complications.also, They may be infertility as female's fertility begins to decrease at their middle thirties.the risks of older parenthood also include havins Gy and involvement in the children's lives.no one wants to be the fuddy duddy.

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fertility 출산 능력 < /p>

fuddy duddy 골동품 < /p>

However, The late embarking on parenthood has more benefits.it is evident that parents will have more accrued experience, Time and money to provide their children better care and education.demonstrating this, It is much more possible for middle aged parents to negotiate flexible work schedules or have chance to do home based work.what's more, Their matured mentality make midlife parenting more scientific and rational.illustrating this, It can be seen how older parents 'rich knowledge and life philosophy help their next generation to form a positive attitude towards life and be capper E of dealing with tough challenges.

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accrued 누적

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mature 성숙 < /p>

mentality 정신 < /p>

philosophy 철학, 이념

despitete It is not a problematic issue.as I see, when parents are better self-established in la ter life, Their descendant can benefit more both substantially and spiritually.

multifaceted 다단계

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spiritually 정신적으로 < /p>

IELTS 시험 대작문 모범문: 젊은 아이의 좋고 나쁨

parenting may be as late as possible, but not later.research shows that by the age of 30, A woman's chances of conceiving begin to dwindle.there are advantages to having children young, Although these days life is rarely that simple.the argument is that, if people want children at all, It is better to start as early as possible for the development of the family and the country.

good or bad, Late parenting is a new fashion.despite cases related to unwanted teenage pregnancies, Many people choose to become parents later in life.this social mainstream is particularly obvious among people of the middle class in most develt Ountries.it is clear enough that many women are putting off babies for career and financial reasons.besides, If people are planning a one-child or two-child family, there is indeed no such a hurry to be "in thefamily way" like those old

Generations ago.no wonder that people prefer to wait until they think they are "ready" to become parents, No matter how late it might be or what could happen as a result.

relatively, the consequences are more negative than pan Not just for the family but also for the country.generally speaking, Late parenthood would mean a surplus of old people and not enough workers.this is likely to stymie the country's economy.in contrast More teenage mothers would mean a population-economic-boom.based on this presumption, Women should finish having their families when they are younger (than 30) 및 then have more years of employment ahead of them.as expected Their children would also sooner come into thelabor force and add to the national economic growth.

in sum, There seem to be alarm bells on late parenting because this could benefit neither the development of the family nor the society in the economic context . while the decision to become parents later in life is personal, even realistic；; The time for a woman to get pregnant is certainly not "forever". in parenting, it is one thing that modern people do not desire having one But it is quite another to be too late to become parents for at least once.

5 월 21 일 IELTS 작문 분석: 늦게 아이를 갖는 이유와 장단점

task 2 nowadays men and women in many countries decide to have babies at an older age.what are the reasons? What effects

Does this trend have on our society and family life? < /p>

육아 이유? 다만' 돈' 과' 한가한' 문제지, 지금 아이를 키우는 데 드는 비용은 duang duang 의 상승, 게다가 내가 매일 유아식품에 나타난 문제까지 합치면, 본 엄마단은 집단적으로 해탈로 변해가고 있다. (윌리엄 셰익스피어, 햄릿, 돈명언) 제품카드는 엄마들이 외양간을 숭상하는 것을 탓하지 마라, 다만 너희들이 하는 짓이 엄마들을 너무 슬프게 하는구나. 죄송 합니다, 멀리, Let's keep on track. 이 외에도, 우리가 방금 언급 한 "유휴" 문제가 있습니다. 현대정 대부분 청년 부부 쌍쌍이 직장인으로 각자의 강도 높은 업무량과 압력에 직면하여 새로운 생명을 돌볼 시간이 거의 없다. 어떤 것은 각자의 일로 인해 두 곳에서 별거할 수도 있고, 결혼조차도 유지하기가 어렵고, 어린아이를 돌보는 것은 말할 것도 없다. (윌리엄 셰익스피어, 햄릿, 남녀명언) 갑자기 맞벌이 법정을 느낀 우리는 마음이 이미 무너졌다. < /p>

만육의 영향? Women with advanced maternal age 고령 산모라는 개념은 낯설지 않을 것이다. 고령 산모가 베이비에서 선천적인 질병과 출산 후 diabetes 당뇨병과 high blood pressure 고혈압을 물려받을 확률이 훨씬 높다는 연구결과가 나왔다. 신체에 미치는 영향은 의료 기술이 발전함에 따라 점차 개선될 수 있을 뿐만 아니라, 더욱 중요한 것은 아이들에 대한 교육 문제이다. 부모와 자녀 간의 나이 차이가 너무 커서, 의사소통 장벽이 서로 이해가 되지 않는다.

아니면 늙은 아들, 아이들에 대한 지나친 사랑, 특히 이전에 제창한 원힐드 폴리시는 이런 상황을 더욱 가중시키고, 어떤 작은 패왕 같은 것을 길러냈다. 종, 왜 일종의 비극이 아닌가? < /p>

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인구 출산 < /p>

거주 인구 퍼멘먼트 인구 유동 인구 floating population

맹류 the unemployed me P>

이주 노동자 migrant worker 비정규직 근로자 seasonal worker

인구 조사 census 인구 기준 population base

인구 밀도 densely populated P>

인구 폭발 population explosion 인구 초과 overpopulation

출생률 birth rate 사망률 mortality rate

자연 증가율 natural growth rate 인구 고령화 aging of population

합법적인 결혼 연령 legal age for marriage 결혼 최고봉 marriage boom

출산 최고봉 베이비보이드 가족계획 패밀리 계획

우생육을 제창하고 만혼만출산을 독려하고, 만혼만출산을 독려한다. advocate healthy pregnancy and scientific nurture And encourage late marriage and postponed child-bearing

중남과 경녀의 관습을 타파하다 change attitude of viewing sons as better than daughe P>

다자복 the more sons, The more blessings

남존여비 Man is superior to woman 승계 carry on the family line

육아 노화 방지 bring up sons to support parents in their old age 피임 통제

피임약 contraceptives 낙태 abortion

피임 birth control 산모 lying-in women

혼전 검사 premarriage health checkings

모성 사망률 maternal mortality rate 유아 사망률 infant mortality rate

피임율 (피임율) contraceptive prevalence rate >

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연간 인구 증가 annual increment of the population

인구 기수가 큰 large population base 평균 연간 성장률 average annual increase

연평균 성장률 average annual growth rate 도시화 urbanization

인구 이동 movement of population 유동 인구 floating population

인구 고령화 the aging of population 교체 수준 population replacement level

사회 계획 장벽 시스템 social security system

농촌 잉여 노동력 이전 the transfer of rural surplus labors

정규 학교 교육 formal school education

가족 계획 정책 준수 The family control policy suits China's basic conditions and serves the interests of the whole nation.

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